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Terminology

The classification of autonomous vehicles used by most companies was developed by engineers at SAE International, a global association of more than 128,000 engineers and technical experts in the aerospace, automotive and commercial vehicle industries.

First, we need to clarify some of the terms that SAE uses in its work.

Dynamic driving refers to operational and tactical intervention in driving:

Operational ones include: steering, control vehicle and the roadway.
Tactical includes: responding to an event, determining the moment of changing lanes, turning, using signals, etc.

Driving modes are the ability to be responsible for various non-standard situations that arise while driving, such as merging two roads, high speed, traffic jams, driving through a closed area (for example, a university campus) and others.

Level 0. No autonomy

Steering, acceleration/deceleration - human.

Driving modes - everything is controlled only by a person.

This level includes vehicles equipped with conventional cruise control. The ability to maintain the speed set by the driver is not considered autonomous technology.

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Level 1: Driver Assistance Required

Steering, acceleration/deceleration - human and systems.
Environmental monitoring – human;
Decision making during dynamic driving – human;

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Level 2. There is partial autonomy

Steering, acceleration/deceleration - human and vehicle systems;
Environmental monitoring – human;
Decision making during dynamic driving – human;
Driving modes - the car is responsible for only certain functions.

Level 2 autonomous systems monitor speed and control under certain conditions. They are able to match the speed of the car with the speed of the flow, as well as follow curves in the roads.

Drivers must constantly monitor the road situation in order to take control in an emergency.


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Level 3. Conditional autonomy

Steering, acceleration/deceleration – vehicle systems;
Monitoring of the surrounding space - vehicle systems;
Decision making during dynamic driving – human;
Driving modes - the car is responsible for only certain functions.

When the autopilot system is turned on, the car can control its own environment. This level requires Autopilot to operate only at low speeds or in stable driving conditions, such as on motorways. At the same time, the driver's hands must remain on the steering wheel.

If the situation becomes unusual, the car informs the driver about this, and he must take control.

The fact that the lines between the third and fourth levels of autonomy are quite blurred is often used as a marketing ploy, declaring that the car has a higher level.

For example, Tesla's autopilot is capable of making decisions on its own during dynamic driving, avoiding a possible collision.

According to the instructions, the driver's hands must remain on the steering wheel. And despite the ability to navigate in space and react to an unexpected event, the professional community classifies Tesla autopilot as level 3, and just a year ago it was even classified as level 2.


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Level 4. High autonomy



Driving modes - the car is responsible for all functions, but is under human control.

This level of autonomy includes all drones that move independently, but under the supervision of an engineer in the car. Not a single production car that this moment equipped with autonomous functions, does not support level 4.


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Level 5. Full autonomy

Steering, acceleration/deceleration - car;
Ambient monitoring – car;
Decision making during dynamic driving - car;
Driving modes - the car controls everything.

The former rector of the Russian School of Economics and ex-chief economist of the EBRD Sergei Guriev has not been to Russia since 2013. He after the start of the so-called “expert case”. “Snob,” summing up the results of the 2010s, asked Guriev, who lives in Paris, to name the main events of the decade, evaluate the actions of the Russian authorities and speculate about the “lack of alternatives” to Vladimir Putin

Photo: Oleg Yakovlev/RBC/TASS


Ɔ. The terrorist attack in Beslan, the death of the Kursk, Putin’s “Munich speech” - these are the events of the 2000s that influenced the course of the country’s development. What events from the tenths can be characterized in the same way?

Protests of 2011-2012, annexation of Crimea, war in southeast Ukraine, murder of Nemtsov. You can also mention the “mad printer” laws and increasing censorship in the media and the Internet. Because of all this, relations with the West began to deteriorate, capital flows, economic stagnation, and a massive brain drain that cannot be measured in any way. The problem is not only that the Russian economy is not growing, but also that the government does not offer any vision of the future, any plan for the country's development. Roughly speaking, Navalny has a realistic economic program, but Putin does not.


Ɔ. But there were also positive moments? For example, in economics? Some of your colleagues say that over the past few years in Russia they have very effectively “cleansed” the banking system of “gray” financial organizations.

The Central Bank has indeed closed many unreliable banks. On the other hand, he did not touch state banks, many of which are used in corruption schemes. Much more significant are the achievements of the Central Bank in the field of monetary policy - the transition to a flexible exchange rate and a reduction in inflation.


Ɔ. What necessary steps in the economy have we not taken?

Instead of fighting corruption, reducing the state presence in the economy and judicial reform, Russia has taken the path of isolation from the global economy and destruction of the investment climate.


Ɔ. Can we say that the result of this decade could have been predicted after the Putin-Medvedev-Putin castling of 2008-2012?

There were reasons for optimism in 2012. It was clear that reforms were needed to accelerate economic growth. It was also clear that without economic growth, government approval ratings would decline. Therefore, it seemed that the reform plans described in Putin's policy article "We need a new economy" and the May 2012 decree would be implemented. It was impossible to predict that the Russian authorities would annex Crimea, thereby ensuring a sharp increase in ratings for several years.


Ɔ. To summarize, have we missed this decade?

From an economic point of view, this decade was a disaster. Russia is increasingly lagging behind developed countries and does not have a plan for how to overcome this lag.


Ɔ. How do you feel about the talk about the imminent “transit” of power? According to what scheme is it possible and is it possible at all?

According to the Constitution Russian Federation Vladimir Putin is due to leave his post in 2024. It can't be any other way. Dot.


Ɔ. How true is the statement that there is no alternative to Putin in Russia? I ask because you recently met in Europe with young Russian politicians - some of them took part in the election campaign for the Moscow City Duma.

At the beginning of the 2000s, when the economy was growing, the authorities had the following rhetoric: “Look, life has become better, this is the merit of Vladimir Putin.” Now, when we are witnessing economic stagnation, when relations with the West are deteriorating, when the level of discontent is growing, not only in Moscow, but also in the regions, other arguments are needed. That’s why propagandists are starting to say that there is no alternative to Putin, he is irreplaceable. But we must understand that this is ordinary propaganda. There are many talented and smart people. To say that in Russia there are no worthy candidates to govern the country is real Russophobia.


Ɔ. Is this the opposition? Or are those you are talking about also in the president’s entourage?

Smart people who understand the real state of things are not necessarily oppositionists. But those who now occupy important government positions naturally refrain from criticizing the authorities.


Ɔ. In 2011 there was “Bolotnaya”, in 2019 they continue in Moscow. They can again be called “massive”. Do you believe in peaceful protest?

In the summer of 2019, we were once again convinced that the Russian opposition is committed to European values ​​and is not going to resort to violence. I also believe that mass peaceful protest is the best remedy protection of your rights. I consider the beatings of peaceful protesters by employees of the Ministry of Internal Affairs and the National Guard unacceptable.


Ɔ. You live in Paris, where the “yellow vest” protests have been going on for several months. Do you think there were “mass riots” in Moscow?

What happened in Paris cannot be attributed solely to the “yellow vests”. Their protest began peacefully, then it was joined by radicals who were engaged in arson and vandalism. They, unlike the peaceful protesters, covered their faces with scarves and masks. Of course, there were no “mass riots” in the Russian capital. People came out peacefully and without weapons, and they were met by the armed National Guard. The use of the term “mass riots” is a technique of modern propaganda, which juggles definitions and substitutes concepts.

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The article provides an analysis of essays-reasonings of 11th graders, written based on the text they read during testing in preparation for the Unified State Exam in the Russian language. The presence of criterion indicators determines special approaches when assessing this type of work, when an essay is considered not as a type of creative work by a student, but rather as a speech work formalized in a special way. In this regard, one of the most effective ways the development of both general and textual speech culture of high school students is considered by turning to holistic speech works, their analysis in the unity of form and content, in the unity of analytical and productive activity, since the ability to find and explain the semantic components of the source text and interpret becomes important its content, going the opposite way to the author's, selecting those means of language that most correctly and accurately reflect the author's thoughts. Identifying the most typical mistakes mistakes made by students when performing this work allows the teacher to adjust the learning process towards eliminating identified shortcomings and errors, focusing on the identified problems.

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State final certification for the course high school in the form of the Unified State Exam - a common event for society, for the education system, for school administrations and teachers. One of the components of the state final certification of 11th grade students is an assessment of the level of development of speech competence. Previously conducted theoretical studies actualize the issues of development of speech culture in the modern educational space. The material presented in the article is a logical continuation of the above studies and makes it possible to characterize the degree of formation of speech skills and characteristics speech behavior of high school students when perceiving and creating text.

An integral part of the test offered to students is Part C, which represents an essay-reasoning written on the basis of the text read. With the help of this task, the level of development of speech skills is revealed: to understand the content of the proposed text and its problem; formulate your own point of view on the identified problem and give reasons for it; build a composition of a written statement, observing the consistency and coherence of the presentation, determined by the chosen style and type of speech; select language means that ensure accuracy and expressiveness of speech, observing the norms of the Russian language. When selecting texts, we take into account age characteristics graduate (the content of the texts should not go beyond the communicative, reading and life experience of the examinee) and issues that are socially significant for a teenager, allowing for their ambiguous interpretation. Below is an analysis of the essays of 11th graders on one of the texts proposed to students of the Altai Territory during testing in preparation for the Unified State Exam in December 2011.

In the last few years, another one has been added to the usual fears of parents. Increasingly, teenagers scare us with their addiction to virtual communication. Here are examples of complaints: “Children cannot be pulled away from the computer. They sit for days. Some ICQ, agents, chats, forums...”; “I don’t understand how there could be any pleasure in this. But the son is sitting at the monitor, laughing at something, or even hitting the table with his fist. It seems to me that he is going crazy - talking to himself”; “I used to play video games, it took a lot of time, I abandoned my homework, but now it’s completely out of hand - it’s like he’s not at home. All day long on the Internet, he says, they have a party there...”

This is roughly how the conversation between concerned parents and teachers and psychologists begins. Then the details become clear: along with the passion for computer conversations, academic performance began to fall, the child spends all the time at home, sitting and looking at the screen. The teenager doesn’t do his homework, doesn’t help around the house, doesn’t go outside, doesn’t play sports. Instead of talking on the phone and walking late into the night, children are increasingly communicating with each other via the Internet. Actually, we’ve heard similar complaints before, only the evil then came not from the computer, but from the telephone or TV. Today's “computer” children are descendants of their “television” parents.

How was this problem solved when today's parents were teenagers? Most likely, they simply grew out of it... It may be objected that not everyone sat endless hours in front of the television screen; Some people already knew clearly in their youth what they would do in life. Many became responsible early because someone had younger brothers and sisters, some were influenced by the example of responsible adults, and others - it is unknown how and why. And although their parents seriously feared for their future, they became completely independent people, with different professions and destinies, many with families...

Why am I saying all this? Moreover, television turned out to be not dangerous in itself. No matter how offensive it may be for someone to recognize their own “backwardness,” they will have to come to terms with the fact that the Internet has become a part of our lives and is not going anywhere. The ability to navigate it and use its capabilities becomes a condition for a successful life in many ways. From an unlimited source of information, it has also turned into a trading network, a method of communication, a means of education... There will be more to come.

We should learn from children. At one time I also had to go through a period of irritation and dissatisfaction. And now, with the help of my son, I have become quite good at navigating the virtual space. It happens that you also “can’t pull it away”...

Spending time online is quite acceptable for teenagers. Most likely, this harmless hobby lies within the age norm. Although in some cases it is necessary to analyze the situation. If virtual communication has become an all-consuming passion, a teenager has withdrawn or become aggressive, his vocabulary has become impoverished, or there are other symptoms that concern you, you should not postpone a visit to a specialist. It’s just important to take into account: the fight will have to be waged not with the computer, but with the reasons that gave rise to the addiction. (According to A. Ivanova)

Text by family psychologist A.G. Ivanova is relevant for teenagers, as it is dedicated to a modern problem - the role of the Internet in the formation and life of an individual. The author poses the following problems to the reader: How should we approach teenagers' interest in communicating on social networks? Is the Internet useful or harmful? How can parents and children achieve mutual understanding regarding hobbies?

Basically, future graduates clearly see the problems of the text outlined above and correctly identify them. However, most schoolchildren focus their attention on the problem of “fathers and sons”, considering it quite broadly. From this point of view, it is important to show that the text that deals with the problems of two generations is not always a text on the topic of fathers and sons. Most often, taking as a basis the problem of mutual understanding between children and parents, students begin to cover it in general terms ( children do not understand their parents; the problem of fathers and children), not taking into account textual issues: misunderstanding in matters of hobbies. It is this fact that explains the incorrect formulation of the text problem: The problem of parents' struggle with the Internet; The problem of misunderstanding between fathers and children; A. Ivanova’s text raises the problem of children’s misunderstanding of selfless parental love; The problem in this text is that children have ceased to be literate, because what kind of literacy can we talk about if people have stopped communicating with each other in reality...

I would like to give as an example an excerpt from an essay where the student ultimately did not formulate the problem: Family psychologist Alexandra Georgievna Ivanova touched upon a very relevant topic at the moment. Having indicated the most exciting topics, she emphasized precisely the fact that points to the main problem of modern youth. I completely agree with the position of the psychologist. And I think this problem needs to be fought. There are quite a lot of such works, when the author of an essay “beats around the bush”, when only general phrases are observed, which indicates the poverty of speech experience and the inability to express his thoughts adequately to the author’s intention.

Thus, when working on highlighting the problem of a text, it is necessary to focus students’ attention on its semantic dominant. This could be, for example, working on the following issues: What does the proposed text “teach” us? What values ​​and traditions are reflected in the proposed text? Are there fragments in the text, reading which we can discuss moral, ethical, social and other problems?

Most of the essays on this text are balanced and judicious. The works examine the positive and negative aspects of such a phenomenon as the Internet, analyze the problem of passion for virtual communication, and touch upon the problem of mutual understanding between children and adults regarding the hobbies of the latter. Reasoning on last problem, like a litmus test, reflect the situation in the family, the teenager’s attitude towards the older generation, which, unfortunately, is not always positive, kind, and respectful. Sometimes some hostility is felt in the teenager’s reasoning, for example:

  • The author's position is that if you consider yourself retarded, then you need to come to terms with it, and not blame someone for it. I agree with Ivanova. You can’t be angry with the younger generation just because they are quicker to master a technical innovation. Progress does not stand still, you need to keep up with the times, and not scold the one who does it faster than you...;
  • Instead of scolding us, it would be better if they looked at themselves and mastered the computer...;
  • I agree with the author, you shouldn’t criticize something you know nothing about. One day at school I heard a song... At home I turned on the speakers at full power. Mom immediately flew into the room shouting: “Make it quieter!” I’d rather listen to something normal!” I was so offended why she didn’t understand me!

Nevertheless, it is gratifying to note that there are only a few such works for which ethical violations can be presented. In the vast majority of students' essays are correct, the problem is defined correctly and discussed in detail. Quite a lot of works in which students show themselves as accomplished individuals who understand and accept the trends of modernity, but give preference to “real life”, for example: And how many games were invented before computers appeared? There were Cossack robbers, various war games and catch-up games. In every yard one could find a hut; everyone strived for live communication. And now? Now I went online and wrote a printed and insensitive: “Hello.”

The peculiarity of the argumentation of one’s own position on this text is that examples from works of art are rarely given as evidence. This is explained by the fact that the Internet is a new phenomenon in our lives. As an argument, students give examples from journalistic genres of the media. In particular, graduates rely on articles published in publications - “Bulletin of Europe” (about achievements in the field of computer technology), “Komsomolskaya Pravda”, “Arguments and Facts”, “Evening Barnaul”, “Health”, “Zarinskaya Advertising”, “On the land of Kosikhinskaya” (about the benefits and harms of the Internet), facts are given from the television program “Let Them Talk” with host Andrei Malakhov. Without a reference to the author and a detailed argument for the article, such examples cannot be counted as a literary argument.

Sometimes, as an argument, examples are given (not always logical and confirming the thesis put forward) from modern fiction: In Semtsov’s work “Network,” the main character Sergei, sitting at a computer, builds a multimedia empire that brings in huge profits. This confirms the benefits of the Internet.

It should be noted that if you set yourself the goal of bringing literary arguments directly to the problem, “in the literal sense” (about social media, about the Internet, about its influence on teenagers), then this is quite difficult. But if you approach the understanding of the problems described above in an indirect, generalized sense, then it becomes clear that the Internet is part of a big problem, when a person lives in his own imaginary world, where he various reasons comfortable and convenient. And those high school students who “penetrated” the subtext easily cited literary examples:

  • The problem of addiction to virtual life is relevant not only today. The life of Ilya Ilyich Oblomov from the work of Ivan Aleksandrovich Goncharov “Oblomov” can be called a kind of virtual life. Main character as if he hid himself in a cocoon, distancing himself from real life. These slippers and robe seem to have merged with the hero, Oblomov’s whole life is like a dream, an endless dream, one might say that this is his usual state. Ilya Ilyich, like a modern teenager, lives in his own little world, isolated from those around him...
  • The novel “Loneliness on the Net” by contemporary Polish writer Janusz Wisniewski tells a poignant love story. The heroes of the work meet in an Internet chat, exchange thoughts, fantasies, and tell the stories of their lives. Everything is fine in this virtual world. But a real meeting will also become a real test, when not virtual, but real people stand in front of each other, when real feelings are tested “live” and do not withstand them. In the real world, everything turns out to be much more complicated, and most importantly, you can’t lie while looking your loved one in the eyes...

Particular attention, in our opinion, should be paid to grammatical and speech errors, which are most often found in students’ works. Their analysis will allow the teacher to plan lessons so as to focus on these issues. Let us highlight the most common types of grammatical and speech errors in students’ works.

1. Violation of coordination, control: So, thanks to the sites with news...; Exactly communicates this to us author...; No time for serious reading...; He concerned about material problems...; Bring big benefit for armies...; I was surprised by the callousness of people...; ... rejoice for success those around you; First author pays attention to complex people.

2. Violation of the connection between subject and predicate: The youth, being on a virtual network for days, forget about reality; But modern generation for unreasonable reasons mercilessly wash them from the face of the earth; A those who has nobility is very in demand in society.

3. Errors in constructing sentences with homogeneous members: Need to take care and store every piece of the past; Need to take care, remember architectural values; ... have to avoid and leave from conflicts; They angry, careless and insensitive.

4. Errors in constructing sentences with participial/adverbial phrases: Reading many works, a person begins to develop feelings, experiences...; After reading Ivanova’s text, disturbing thoughts appear; And even after death, lying in a coffin, he had a smile on him(about "Man in a Case") ; Sitting at the monitor for a long time, your eyes begin to hurt.

5. Violation of lexical compatibility: In the last few years it has become flourish problem...; E there are people who moral principles do not torment; Only sadness and longing come into my head; Well why man does bad actions?; Bring good benefit to those around...; ...happens brain degradation...; ... fulfill their civilians rights; Need to nurture your inner world.

Thus, we can state a low level of proficiency in grammatical norms of the Russian language. Analysis of the identified errors allows the teacher to plan exercises and tasks to prevent and eliminate them. In this plan artistic text as an exemplary speech work will provide the necessary speech experience and allow you to see how a master of words “uses” language to express an intention.

A special type of error includes violations of factual accuracy. As a rule, factual errors are mostly associated with distortion of names, genres, authors of literary works: In the novel War and Peace, Tolstoy is outraged by what the French were doing to our culture; Lermontov “Crime and Punishment; In the work "The Captain's Daughter"; Most modern youth do not know such famous works as “War and Peace” by L.N. Tolstoy, “The Captain’s Daughter” by A.S. Pushkin, “The Thunderstorm” by Gorky, “Hero of Our Time” by N.I. Lermontov; Chingiz Aimentov in the novel “Stormy Stop”. Less common are incorrect interpretations of background material: Alexander Matrosov covered the firing cannon with his body the enemy, saving the lives of his comrades; In 2011 The Cathedral of Christ the Savior in Moscow was restored.

And finally, a fairly large layer of errors, in principle, cannot be classified as a typical speech, grammatical or factual error. The name “You can’t make it up on purpose” is more appropriate for such errors, for example: One may recall Gogol’s work “Taras And Bulba"; Books must be read, because they are written by the living hand of a poet; It’s easier for me to go online and read Pushkin’s “War and Peace” than to watch this story in the form of a movie; It is a pity that the Internet did not exist during the development of poetry. I think Tolstoy's War and Peace would be even more fascinating; In the 21st century, children have a new passion - computers! ... Replacing the usual Pushkin with all sorts of reading matter: detective stories, family novels - this is not the case! When your child grows up, he asks you to read a book, and you give him Dontsov. Nothing good will come out of it.

“The true height of speech culture,” notes G. A. Zolotova, “is determined by the variety of ways of expressing the same meaning at the disposal of the speaker, the accuracy and appropriateness of their choice in accordance with the communicative task.” The above quote reflects the idea of ​​speech culture as part of the general spiritual culture of the people, existing in the form of exemplary, perfect texts created over the centuries by the creativity of the people, their outstanding representatives. Analysis of the implementation of part C allows the teacher to adjust the educational process, focusing on the identified problem areas. In our opinion, one of the most effective ways to develop a high school student’s speech culture is to refer to the text and analyze it in the unity of form and content. It is speech practice that is a means of creating the inner world of the individual, the richness of its content, reflecting life ideals, the orientation of the individual, and life self-determination. In this sense, the text as a phenomenon of speech practice acts both as a result of primary and as an object of secondary communicative activities, which determines the demand for new methodological techniques in teaching speech culture to students based on textual activity and with a focus on it, which, in turn, involves focusing not only on the speech process, but, above all, on qualitative changes in personality.

Thus, in order to carry out and, above all, include the student in the creative activity of analyzing a text and creating his own speech work based on it, it is necessary to transfer previously acquired knowledge and developed analysis skills to a new situation, which is characterized by the relationship between analytical and productive activities and can be implemented in teaching based on a text-technological approach.

Reviewers:

  • Karakozov S.D., Doctor of Pedagogical Sciences, Professor, I Vice-Rector of the Altai State Pedagogical Academy, Barnaul.
  • Suvorova E.P., Doctor of Pedagogical Sciences, Professor of the UNESCO Department of Education in a Multicultural Society, Russian State Pedagogical University named after. A.I. Herzen, St. Petersburg.

Examples from student work are given in full accordance with the original.

Bibliographic link

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Among sentences 27-37, find a sentence with a separate common agreed upon definition. Write the number of this offer.


(1) In the last few years, another one has been added to the usual fears of parents. (2) Increasingly, teenagers scare us with their addiction to virtual communication. (3) Here are examples of complaints.

“(4) You can’t drag children away from the computer. (5) They sit for days. (6) Some kind of ICQ, agents, chats, forums..."

“(7) I don’t understand what pleasure there can be from this. (8) But the son is sitting at the monitor, laughing at something, or even hitting the table with his fist. (9) It seems to me that he is going crazy - talking to himself.”

“(10) I used to play video games, it took a lot of time, I abandoned my homework, but now it’s completely out of hand - it’s like he’s not at home. (11) All day long on the Internet, he says, they have a party there...”

(12) This is roughly how the conversation between concerned parents and teachers and psychologists begins. (13) Then the details become clear: along with the passion for computer conversations, academic performance began to fall, the child spends all the time at home, sitting and looking at the screen. (14) The teenager doesn’t do his homework, doesn’t help around the house, doesn’t go outside, doesn’t play sports.

(15) Instead of talking on the phone and walking late into the night, children increasingly communicate with each other via the Internet. (16) Actually, we’ve heard similar complaints before, only the evil then came not from the computer, but from the telephone or TV. (17) Today's “computer” children are the descendants of their “television” parents.

(18) How was this problem solved when today’s parents were teenagers? (19) Most likely, they simply grew out of it... (20) It may be objected to me that not everyone sat endless hours in front of the television screen; Some people already knew clearly in their youth what they would do in life. (21) Many became responsible early, because some had younger brothers and sisters, some were influenced by the example of responsible adults, and others - it is unknown how and why. (22) And although their parents seriously feared for their future, they became completely independent people, with different professions and destinies, many with families...

(23) Why am I saying all this? (24) Moreover, television turned out to be not dangerous in itself. (25) No matter how offensive it may be for someone to realize their own “backwardness,” they will have to come to terms with the fact that the Internet has become a part of our lives and is not going anywhere. (26) The ability to navigate it and use its capabilities becomes a condition for a successful life in many senses. (27) From an unlimited source of information, it has also turned into a trading network, a method of communication, a means of education... (28) More to come.

(29) We should learn from children. (30) I, too, at one time had to go through a period of irritation and discontent. (31) And now, with the help of my son, I have become quite good at navigating the virtual space. (32) Sometimes you can’t “pull it away” either...

(33) Spending time online is quite acceptable for teenagers. (34) Most likely, this harmless hobby lies within the age norm. (35) Although in some cases it is necessary to analyze the situation.

(36) If virtual communication has become an all-consuming passion, the teenager has withdrawn or become aggressive, his vocabulary has become impoverished, or there are other symptoms that concern you, you should not postpone a visit to a specialist. (37) It’s just important to take into account: the fight will have to be waged not with the computer, but with the reasons that gave rise to the addiction.

(According to A. Ivanova*)

Alexandra Georgievna Ivanova - family psychologist.

(2) Increasingly, teenagers scare us with their addiction to virtual communication.

Which of the statements correspond to the content of the text? Please provide answer numbers.

1) Parents of modern teenagers are most concerned about the fact that their children spend entire days watching television.

2) Parents of modern teenagers, even with a strong desire, will not be able to learn to navigate the virtual space.

3) An educated person should not use the Internet.

4) Modern teenagers communicate today via the Internet.

5) A visit to a specialist is necessary only if the teenager begins to show signs of Internet addiction.

Explanation.

Statement 1) contradicts sentences No. 1-2.

Statement 2) contradicts proposals No. 29-31.

Statement 3) contradicts proposals No. 26-27.

Statement 4) is confirmed by sentence No. 15.

Statement 5) is confirmed by sentence No. 36.

Answer: 45|54

Answer: 45|54

Relevance: 2016-2017

Difficulty: normal

Codifier section: Semantic and compositional integrity of the text.

Which of the following statements are true? Please provide answer numbers.

Enter the numbers in ascending order.

1) Sentences 18-19 present the reasoning.

2) Sentence 8 of the text contains a descriptive fragment.

3) Sentence 33 confirms the judgment expressed in sentence 29 of the text.

4) Sentences 26-27 contain the rationale for the judgment expressed in sentence 25.

5) Sentences 4-9 do not contain examples for sentence 3.

Explanation.

Sentence 33 does not confirm the judgment expressed in sentence 29 of the text.

And sentences 4-9 provide examples to support the idea in sentence 3.

The eighth sentence contains a narrative, not a description, so the second answer is also incorrect.

Options 1 and 4 are correct.

Answer: 14|41.

The correct answer is indicated under number

Answer: 14|41

Relevance: 2016-2017

Difficulty: normal

Codifier section: Functional and semantic types of speech

Write down synonyms from sentences 28-30.

Explanation.

In sentence 30, “I, too, at one time had to go through a period of irritation and dissatisfaction,” the synonyms “irritation” and “dissatisfaction” are used.

The words “time” and “period” can (and even then with a stretch) be considered contextual synonyms.

Answer: irritation dissatisfaction

Answer: irritation dissatisfaction|irritation dissatisfaction

Relevance: 2016-2017

Difficulty: normal

Codifier section: Lexical meaning of the word

Ilya Shutov 19.05.2016 17:53

Tatiana Statsenko

no, it will not

Indicate the method of forming the word APPROXIMATELY (sentence 12).

Explanation.

The adverb “approximately” is formed from the adjective “approximate” using the suffix -o-.

Answer: suffix

Among sentences 4-11, find one(s) that is related to the previous one using a personal pronoun. Write the number(s) of this sentence(s).

Sentence 9 “It seems to me that he is going crazy - talking to himself” is connected to the previous one using the personal pronoun HE (corresponds to the word SON from the previous sentence).

Sentence 7 with the pronoun I is not suitable, because it is connected with the sixth sentence not using the pronoun I, but using the pronoun THIS (that is, chats, aseks, forums).

Answer: 9

Answer: 9

Rule: Task 25. Means of communication of sentences in the text

MEANS OF CONNECTING SENTENCES IN THE TEXT

Several sentences connected into a whole by theme and main idea are called text (from the Latin textum - fabric, connection, connection).

Obviously, all sentences separated by a period are not isolated from each other. There is a semantic connection between two adjacent sentences of a text, and not only sentences located next to each other can be related, but also those separated from each other by one or more sentences. The semantic relations between sentences are different: the content of one sentence can be contrasted with the content of another; the contents of two or more sentences can be compared with one another; the content of the second sentence may reveal the meaning of the first or clarify one of its members, and the content of the third - the meaning of the second, etc. The purpose of task 23 is to determine the type of connection between sentences.

The task could be worded like this:

Among sentences 11-18, find one(s) that is related to the previous one using a demonstrative pronoun, adverb and cognates. Write the number(s) of the offer(s)

Or: Determine the type of connection between sentences 12 and 13.

Remember that the previous one is ONE ABOVE. Thus, if the interval 11-18 is indicated, then the required sentence is within the limits indicated in the task, and answer 11 may be correct if this sentence is related to the 10th topic indicated in the task. There may be 1 or more answers. Point for successfully completing the task - 1.

Let's move on to the theoretical part.

Most often we use this model of text construction: each sentence is linked to the next one, this is called a chain link. (We will talk about parallel communication below). We speak and write, we combine independent sentences into text using simple rules. Here's the gist: two adjacent sentences must be about the same subject.

All types of communication are usually divided into lexical, morphological and syntactic. As a rule, when connecting sentences into a text, they can be used several types of communication at the same time. This greatly facilitates the search for the desired sentence in the specified fragment. Let us dwell in detail on each of the types.

23.1. Communication using lexical means.

1. Words of one thematic group.

Words of the same thematic group are words that have a common lexical meaning and denote similar, but not identical concepts.

Example words: 1) Forest, path, trees; 2) buildings, streets, sidewalks, squares; 3) water, fish, waves; hospital, nurses, emergency room, ward

Water was clean and transparent. Waves They ran ashore slowly and silently.

2. Generic words.

Generic words are words connected by the relation genus - species: genus is a broader concept, species is a narrower one.

Example words: Chamomile - flower; birch - tree; car - transport and so on.

Example sentences: It was still growing under the window birch. I have so many memories associated with this tree...

Field daisies are becoming rare. But this is unpretentious flower.

3 Lexical repetition

Lexical repetition is the repetition of the same word in the same word form.

The closest connection of sentences is expressed primarily in repetition. Repetition of one or another member of a sentence - main feature chain connection. For example, in sentences Behind the garden there was a forest. The forest was deaf and neglected the connection is built according to the “subject - subject” model, that is, the subject named at the end of the first sentence is repeated at the beginning of the next; in sentences Physics is a science. Science must use the dialectical method- “model predicate - subject”; in the example The boat moored to the shore. The shore was strewn with small pebbles- model “circumstance - subject” and so on. But if in the first two examples the words forest and science stand in each of the adjacent sentences in the same case, then the word shore has different forms. Lexical repetition in Unified State Examination tasks will be considered the repetition of a word in the same word form, used to enhance the impact on the reader.

In texts of artistic and journalistic styles, the chain connection through lexical repetition often has an expressive, emotional character, especially when the repetition is at the junction of sentences:

Aral disappears from the map of the Fatherland sea.

Whole sea!

The use of repetition here is used to enhance the impact on the reader.

Let's look at examples. We are not yet taking additional means of communication into account; we are looking only at lexical repetition.

(36) I heard a very brave man who went through the war once say: “ It was scary, very scary." (37) He spoke the truth: he it was scary.

(15) As a teacher, I had the opportunity to meet young people yearning for a clear and precise answer to the question about higher values life. (16) 0 values, allowing you to distinguish good from evil and choose the best and most worthy.

note: different forms of words refer to a different type of connection. For more information about the difference, see the paragraph on word forms.

4 Similar words

Cognates are words with the same root and common meaning.

Example words: Homeland, be born, birth, generation; tear, break, burst

Example sentences: I'm lucky be born healthy and strong. The story of my birth unremarkable.

Although I understood that a relationship was necessary break, but couldn't do it myself. This gap would be very painful for both of us.

5 Synonyms

Synonyms are words of the same part of speech that are close in meaning.

Example words: be bored, frown, be sad; fun, joy, jubilation

Example sentences: In parting she said that will miss you. I knew that too I'll be sad from our walks and conversations.

Joy grabbed me, picked me up and carried me... Jubilation there seemed to be no boundaries: Lina answered, finally answered!

It should be noted that synonyms are difficult to find in the text if you need to look for connections only using synonyms. But, as a rule, along with this method of communication, others are also used. So, in example 1 there is a conjunction Same , this connection will be discussed below.

6 Contextual synonyms

Contextual synonyms are words of the same part of speech that are similar in meaning only in a given context, since they relate to the same object (feature, action).

Example words: kitten, poor fellow, naughty; girl, student, beauty

Example sentences: Kitty has been living with us for quite some time. My husband took it off poor fellow from the tree where he climbed to escape the dogs.

I guessed that she student. Young woman continued to remain silent, despite all efforts on my part to get her to talk.

These words are even more difficult to find in the text: after all, the author makes them synonyms. But along with this method of communication, others are also used, which makes the search easier.

7 Antonyms

Antonyms are words of the same part of speech that have opposite meanings.

Example words: laughter, tears; hot Cold

Example sentences: I pretended that I liked this joke and squeezed out something like laughter. But tears They choked me, and I quickly left the room.

Her words were hot and burned. Eyes chilled cold. I felt like I was under a contrast shower...

8 Contextual antonyms

Contextual antonyms are words of the same part of speech that have opposite meanings only in a given context.

Example words: mouse - lion; home - work green - ripe

Example sentences: On work this man was gray with the mouse. At home woke up in it a lion.

Ripe The berries can be safely used to make jam. And here green It’s better not to put them in, they are usually bitter and can ruin the taste.

We draw attention to the non-random coincidence of terms(synonyms, antonyms, including contextual ones) in this task and tasks 22 and 24: this is one and the same lexical phenomenon, but viewed from a different angle. Lexical means can serve to connect two adjacent sentences, or they may not be a connecting link. At the same time, they will always be a means of expression, that is, they have every chance of being the object of tasks 22 and 24. Therefore, advice: when completing task 23, pay attention to these tasks. You will learn more theoretical material about lexical means from the reference rule for task 24.

23.2. Communication using morphological means

Along with lexical means of communication, morphological ones are also used.

1. Pronoun

A pronoun connection is a connection in which ONE word or SEVERAL words from the previous sentence are replaced by a pronoun. To see such a connection, you need to know what a pronoun is and what categories of meaning there are.

What you need to know:

Pronouns are words that are used instead of a name (noun, adjective, numeral), denote persons, indicate objects, characteristics of objects, the number of objects, without naming them specifically.

Based on their meaning and grammatical features, nine categories of pronouns are distinguished:

1) personal (I, we; you, you; he, she, it; they);

2) returnable (self);

3) possessive (my, yours, ours, yours, yours); used as possessives also forms of personal: his (jacket), her work),their (merit).

4) demonstrative (this, that, such, such, such, so much);

5) definitive(himself, most, all, everyone, each, other);

6) relative (who, what, which, which, which, how many, whose);

7) interrogative (who? what? which? whose? which? how many? where? when? where? from where? why? why? what?);

8) negative (nobody, nothing, nobody);

9) indefinite (someone, something, someone, anyone, anyone, someone).

Do not forget that pronouns change by case, therefore, “you”, “me”, “about us”, “about them”, “no one”, “everyone” are forms of pronouns.

As a rule, the task indicates WHAT category the pronoun should be, but this is not necessary if in the specified period there are no other pronouns that act as LINKING elements. You need to clearly understand that NOT EVERY pronoun that appears in the text is a connecting link.

Let's look at the examples and determine how sentences 1 and 2 are related; 2 and 3.

1) Our school has recently been renovated. 2) I finished it many years ago, but sometimes I went in and wandered around the school floors. 3) Now they are some strangers, different, not mine....

There are two pronouns in the second sentence, both personal, I And her. Which one is the one paperclip, which connects the first and second sentence? If it's a pronoun I, what it is replaced in sentence 1? Nothing. What replaces the pronoun? her? Word " school" from the first sentence. We conclude: connection using a personal pronoun her.

There are three pronouns in the third sentence: they are somehow mine. The second is connected only by a pronoun They(=floors from the second sentence). Rest do not correlate in any way with the words of the second sentence and do not replace anything. Conclusion: the second sentence connects the third with the pronoun They.

What is the practical importance of understanding this method of communication? The fact is that pronouns can and should be used instead of nouns, adjectives and numerals. Use, but not abuse, since the abundance of words “he”, “his”, “their” sometimes leads to misunderstanding and confusion.

2. Adverb

Communication using adverbs is a connection, the features of which depend on the meaning of the adverb.

To see such a connection, you need to know what an adverb is and what categories of meaning there are.

Adverbs are unchangeable words that denote an action and refer to a verb.

Adverbs of the following meanings can be used as means of communication:

Time and space: below, on the left, next to, at the beginning, long ago and the like.

Example sentences: We got to work. At the beginning it was hard: I couldn’t work as a team, I had no ideas. After got involved, felt their strength and even got excited.note: Sentences 2 and 3 are related to sentence 1 using the indicated adverbs. This type of connection is called parallel connection.

We climbed to the very top of the mountain. Around There were only the treetops of us. Near The clouds floated with us. A similar example of a parallel connection: 2 and 3 are connected to 1 using the indicated adverbs.

Demonstrative adverbs. (They are sometimes called pronominal adverbs, since they do not name how or where the action takes place, but only point to it): there, here, there, then, from there, because, so and the like.

Example sentences: Last summer I was on holiday in one of the sanatoriums in Belarus. From there It was almost impossible to make a call, let alone surf the Internet. The adverb “from there” replaces the whole phrase.

Life went on as usual: I studied, my mother and father worked, my sister got married and left with her husband. So three years have passed. The adverb “so” summarizes the entire content of the previous sentence.

It is possible to use other categories of adverbs, for example, negative: B school and university I didn’t have good relationships with my peers. Yes and nowhere did not fold; however, I didn’t suffer from this, I had a family, I had brothers, they replaced my friends.

3. Union

Communication using conjunctions is the most common type of connection, thanks to which various relationships arise between sentences related to the meaning of the conjunction.

Communication using coordinating conjunctions: but, and, and, but, also, or, however and others. The assignment may or may not indicate the type of union. Therefore, the material on alliances should be repeated.

More details about coordinating conjunctions are described in a special section.

Example sentences: By the end of the day off we were incredibly tired. But the mood was amazing! Communication using the adversative conjunction “but”.

It's always been like this... Or that's how it seemed to me...Connection using the disjunctive conjunction “or”.

We draw attention to the fact that very rarely only one conjunction is involved in the formation of a connection: as a rule, lexical means of communication are used simultaneously.

Communication using subordinating conjunctions: because, so. A very atypical case, since subordinating conjunctions connect sentences within a complex sentence. In our opinion, with such a connection there is a deliberate break in the structure of a complex sentence.

Example sentences: I was in complete despair... For I didn’t know what to do, where to go and, most importantly, who to turn to for help. The conjunction for has the meaning because, because, indicates the reason for the hero’s condition.

I didn’t pass the exams, I didn’t go to college, I couldn’t ask for help from my parents and I wouldn’t do it. So There was only one thing left to do: find a job. The conjunction “so” has the meaning of consequence.

4. Particles

Particle Communication always accompanies other types of communication.

Particles after all, and only, here, there, only, even, same add additional shades to the proposal.

Example sentences: Call your parents, talk to them. After all It's so simple and at the same time difficult - to love....

Everyone in the house was already asleep. AND only Grandma muttered quietly: she always read prayers before going to bed, asking the heavenly forces for a better life for us.

After my husband left, my soul became empty and my house deserted. Even the cat, who usually rushed like a meteor around the apartment, just yawns sleepily and keeps trying to climb into my arms. Here whose arms would I lean on...Please note that connecting particles come at the beginning of the sentence.

5. Word forms

Communication using word form is that in adjacent sentences the same word is used in different

  • if this noun - number and case
  • If adjective - gender, number and case
  • If pronoun - gender, number and case depending on the category
  • If verb in person (gender), number, tense

Verbs and participles, verbs and gerunds are considered different words.

Example sentences: Noise gradually increased. From this growing noise I felt uneasy.

I knew my son captain. With myself captain fate did not bring me together, but I knew that it was only a matter of time.

note: the assignment may say “word forms”, and then it is ONE word in different forms;

“forms of words” - and these are already two words repeated in adjacent sentences.

There is a particular difficulty in the difference between word forms and lexical repetition.

Information for teachers.

Let's consider as an example the most difficult task of the real Unified State Exam 2016. Here is the full fragment published on the FIPI website in “ Guidelines for teachers (2016)"

Difficulties for examinees in completing task 23 were caused by cases where the task condition required distinguishing between the form of a word and lexical repetition as a means of connecting sentences in the text. In these cases, when analyzing language material, students should pay attention to the fact that lexical repetition involves the repetition of a lexical unit with a special stylistic task.

Here is the condition of task 23 and a fragment of the text of one of the versions of the Unified State Exam 2016:

“Among sentences 8–18, find one that is related to the previous one using lexical repetition. Write the number of this offer."

Below is the beginning of the text given for analysis.

- (7) What kind of an artist are you when you don’t love your native land, eccentric!

(8) Maybe that’s why Berg wasn’t good at landscapes. (9) He preferred a portrait, a poster. (10) He tried to find the style of his time, but these attempts were full of failures and ambiguities.

(11) One day Berg received a letter from the artist Yartsev. (12) He called him to come to the Murom forests, where he spent the summer.

(13) August was hot and windless. (14) Yartsev lived far from a deserted station, in the forest, on the shore of a deep lake with black water. (15) He rented a hut from a forester. (16) Berg was driven to the lake by the forester’s son Vanya Zotov, a stooped and shy boy. (17) Berg lived on the lake for about a month. (18) He was not going to work and did not take oil paints with him.

Proposition 15 is related to Proposition 14 by personal pronoun "He"(Yartsev).

Proposition 16 is related to Proposition 15 by word forms "forester": prepositional case form, controlled by a verb, and non-prepositional form, controlled by a noun. These word forms express different meanings: the meaning of object and the meaning of belonging, and the use of the word forms in question does not carry a stylistic load.

Proposition 17 is related to sentence 16 by word forms (“on the lake - to the lake”; "Berga - Berg").

Proposition 18 is related to the previous one by personal pronoun "he"(Berg).

The correct answer in task 23 of this option is 10. It is sentence 10 of the text that is connected with the previous one (sentence 9) using lexical repetition (the word “he”).

It should be noted that there is no consensus among the authors of various manuals, What is considered a lexical repetition - the same word in different cases (persons, numbers) or in the same one. The authors of the books of the publishing house “National Education”, “Exam”, “Legion” (authors Tsybulko I.P., Vasilyev I.P., Gosteva Yu.N., Senina N.A.) do not give a single example in which the words V various forms would be considered lexical repetition.

At the same time, very complex cases in which words in different cases have the same form are treated differently in the manuals. The author of the books N.A. Senina sees this as a form of the word. I.P. Tsybulko (based on materials from a 2017 book) sees lexical repetition. So, in sentences like I saw the sea in a dream. The sea was calling me the word “sea” has different cases, but at the same time it undoubtedly has the same stylistic task that I.P. writes about. Tsybulko. Without delving into the linguistic solution to this issue, we will outline the position of RESHUEGE and give recommendations.

1. All obviously non-matching forms are word forms, not lexical repetition. Please note that we are talking about the same linguistic phenomenon as in task 24. And in 24, lexical repetitions are only repeated words in the same forms.

2. There will be no matching forms in the tasks on RESHUEGE: if the linguist specialists themselves cannot figure it out, then school graduates cannot do it.

3. If you come across tasks with similar difficulties during the exam, we look at those additional means of communication that will help you make your choice. After all, the compilers of KIMs may have their own, separate opinion. Unfortunately, this may be the case.

23.3 Syntactic means.

Introductory words

Communication with the help of introductory words accompanies and complements any other connection, adding shades of meaning characteristic of introductory words.

Of course, you need to know which words are introductory.

He was hired. Unfortunately, Anton was too ambitious. On the one side, the company needed such individuals, on the other hand, he was not inferior to anyone or anything, if something was, as he said, below his level.

Let us give examples of the definition of means of communication in a short text.

(1) We met Masha several months ago. (2) My parents had not seen her yet, but did not insist on meeting her. (3) It seemed that she also did not strive for rapprochement, which upset me somewhat.

Let's determine how the sentences in this text are connected.

Sentence 2 is related to sentence 1 using a personal pronoun her, which replaces the name Masha in sentence 1.

Sentence 3 is related to sentence 2 using word forms she her: “she” is a nominative case form, “her” is a genitive case form.

In addition, sentence 3 also has other means of communication: it is a conjunction Same, introductory word it seemed, series of synonymous constructions didn't insist on getting to know each other And didn't try to get closer.

Denis Chechilenko 10.11.2015 14:16

Do I need to indicate the sentence in which this pronoun appears? I just indicated 10 because... said, which is related to the previous sentence.

Tatyana Yudina

It must be the ninth. It is connected with the eighth.

Read an excerpt from the review. It examines the linguistic features of the text. Some terms used in the review are missing. Fill in the blanks with numbers corresponding to the number of the term from the list.

“Talking about what worries parents of teenagers today, the author uses a technique such as (A)_____ (sentences 4-6, 7-9, 10-11), as well as a syntactic device such as (B)_____ (in sentences 13, 14). The use of such a lexical device as (B)_____ (“going crazy” in sentence 9, “out of hand” in sentence 10) emphasizes the parents’ concern about the current situation. With the help of such a technique as (G)_____ (sentences 18-19, 23-24), A. Ivanova seeks to attract readers to think.”

List of terms:

3) phraseology

4) quoting

5) rhetorical question

7) parcellation

8) series of homogeneous members

9) question-and-answer form of presentation

Write down the numbers in your answer, arranging them in the order corresponding to the letters:

ABING

Explanation (see also Rule below).

Let's fill in the blanks.

“Talking about what worries parents of teenagers today, the author uses such a technique as citation(sentences 4-6, 7-9, 10-11), as well as such syntactic means as rows of homogeneous members(in sentences 13, 14). The use of such lexical means as phraseological unit(“going crazy” in sentence 9, “out of hand” in sentence 10), emphasizes the parents’ concern about the current situation. With the help of such a technique as (in sentences 18, 23 the author asks a question, and in sentences 19, 24 he answers it), A. Ivanova seeks to attract readers to think.”

Answer: 4839.

Answer: 4839

Rule: Task 26. Language means of expression

ANALYSIS OF MEANS OF EXPRESSION.

The purpose of the task is to determine the means of expression used in the review by establishing correspondence between the gaps indicated by letters in the text of the review and the numbers with definitions. You need to write matches only in the order in which the letters appear in the text. If you do not know what is hidden under a particular letter, you must put “0” in place of this number. You can get from 1 to 4 points for the task.

When completing task 26, you should remember that you are filling in the gaps in the review, i.e. restore the text, and with it semantic and grammatical connection. Therefore, an analysis of the review itself can often serve as an additional clue: various adjectives of one kind or another, predicates consistent with the omissions, etc. It will make it easier to complete the task and divide the list of terms into two groups: the first includes terms based on the meaning of the word, the second - the structure of the sentence. You can carry out this division, knowing that all means are divided into TWO large groups: the first includes lexical (non-special means) and tropes; secondly, figures of speech (some of them are called syntactic).

26.1 TROPIC WORD OR EXPRESSION USED IN A FIGUREABLE MEANING TO CREATE AN ARTISTIC IMAGE AND ACHIEVE GREATER EXPRESSIVENESS. Tropes include such techniques as epithet, comparison, personification, metaphor, metonymy, sometimes they include hyperbole and litotes.

Note: The assignment usually states that these are TRAILS.

In the review, examples of tropes are indicated in parentheses, like a phrase.

1.Epithet(in translation from Greek - application, addition) - this is a figurative definition that marks an essential feature for a given context in the depicted phenomenon. The epithet differs from a simple definition in its artistic expressiveness and imagery. The epithet is based on a hidden comparison.

Epithets include all “colorful” definitions that are most often expressed adjectives:

sad orphaned land(F.I. Tyutchev), gray fog, lemon light, silent peace(I.A. Bunin).

Epithets can also be expressed:

-nouns, acting as applications or predicates, giving figurative characterization subject: winter sorceress; mother is the damp earth; The poet is a lyre, and not just the nanny of his soul(M. Gorky);

-adverbs, acting as circumstances: In the wild north stands alone...(M. Yu. Lermontov); The leaves were tensely stretched in the wind (K. G. Paustovsky);

-participles: waves rush thundering and sparkling;

-pronouns, expressing the superlative degree of a particular state of the human soul:

After all, there were fighting fights, Yes, they say, still which! (M. Yu. Lermontov);

-participles and participial phrases: Nightingales in vocabulary rumbling announce the forest limits (B. L. Pasternak); I also admit the appearance of... greyhound writers who cannot prove where they spent the night yesterday, and who have no other words in their language except the words not remembering kinship(M. E. Saltykov-Shchedrin).

2. Comparison is a visual technique based on the comparison of one phenomenon or concept with another. Unlike metaphor, comparison is always binary: it names both compared objects (phenomena, characteristics, actions).

The villages are burning, they have no protection.

The sons of the fatherland are defeated by the enemy,

And the glow like an eternal meteor,

Playing in the clouds frightens the eye. (M. Yu. Lermontov)

Comparisons are expressed in various ways:

Instrumental case form of nouns:

Nightingale vagrant Youth flew by,

Wave in bad weather Joy fades away (A.V. Koltsov)

Comparative form of an adjective or adverb: These eyes greener sea ​​and our cypresses darker(A. Akhmatova);

Comparative phrases with conjunctions like, as if, as if, etc.:

Like a predatory beast, to the humble abode

The winner breaks in with bayonets... (M. Yu. Lermontov);

Using the words similar, similar, this is:

On the eyes of a cautious cat

Similar your eyes (A. Akhmatova);

Using comparative clauses:

Golden leaves swirled

In the pinkish water of the pond,

Like a light flock of butterflies

Flies breathlessly towards a star. (S. A. Yesenin)

3.Metaphor(in translation from Greek - transfer) is a word or expression that is used in a figurative meaning based on the similarity of two objects or phenomena for some reason. Unlike a comparison, which contains both what is being compared and what is being compared with, a metaphor contains only the second, which creates compactness and figurativeness in the use of the word. A metaphor can be based on the similarity of objects in shape, color, volume, purpose, sensations, etc.: a waterfall of stars, an avalanche of letters, a wall of fire, an abyss of grief, a pearl of poetry, a spark of love and etc.

All metaphors are divided into two groups:

1) general language(“erased”): golden hands, a storm in a teacup, moving mountains, strings of the soul, love has faded;

2) artistic(individual author’s, poetic):

And the stars fade diamond thrill

IN painless cold dawn (M. Voloshin);

Empty skies transparent glass (A. Akhmatova);

AND blue, bottomless eyes

They bloom on the far shore. (A. A. Blok)

Metaphor happens not just single: it can develop in the text, forming entire chains of figurative expressions, in many cases - covering, as if permeating the entire text. This extended, complex metaphor, a complete artistic image.

4. Personification- this is a type of metaphor based on the transfer of signs of a living being to natural phenomena, objects and concepts. Most often, personifications are used to describe nature:

Rolling through the sleepy valleys, the sleepy mists lay down, And only the sound of a horse's tramp is lost in the distance. The autumn day has faded, turning pale, with the fragrant leaves curled up, and the half-withered flowers are enjoying dreamless sleep.. (M. Yu. Lermontov)

5. Metonymy(translated from Greek - renaming) is the transfer of a name from one object to another based on their contiguity. Adjacency can be a manifestation of connection:

Between action and the instrument of action: Their villages and fields for a violent raid He doomed to swords and fires(A.S. Pushkin);

Between an object and the material from which the object is made: ... or on silver, I ate on gold(A. S. Griboyedov);

Between a place and the people in that place: The city was noisy, flags crackled, wet roses fell from the bowls of flower girls... (Yu. K. Olesha)

6. Synecdoche(in translation from Greek - correlation) - this a type of metonymy, based on the transfer of meaning from one phenomenon to another based on the quantitative relationship between them. Most often, transfer occurs:

From less to more: Even a bird does not fly to him, And a tiger does not come... (A.S. Pushkin);

From part to whole: Beard, why are you still silent?(A.P. Chekhov)

7. Periphrase, or periphrasis(translated from Greek - a descriptive expression) is a phrase that is used instead of any word or phrase. For example, Petersburg in verse

A. S. Pushkin - “Peter’s Creation”, “Beauty and Wonder of the Full Countries”, “The City of Petrov”; A. A. Blok in the poems of M. I. Tsvetaeva - “a knight without reproach”, “blue-eyed snow singer”, “snow swan”, “almighty of my soul”.

8.Hyperbole(translated from Greek - exaggeration) is a figurative expression containing an exorbitant exaggeration of any attribute of an object, phenomenon, action: Rare bird will fly to the middle of the Dnieper(N.V. Gogol)

And at that very moment there were couriers, couriers, couriers on the streets... can you imagine, thirty five thousands only couriers! (N.V. Gogol).

9. Litota(translated from Greek - smallness, moderation) is a figurative expression containing an exorbitant understatement of any attribute of an object, phenomenon, action: What tiny cows! There is, right, less than a pinhead.(I. A. Krylov)

And walking importantly, in decorous calm, the horse is led by the bridle by a peasant in large boots, in a short sheepskin coat, in large mittens... and from the nails myself!(N.A. Nekrasov)

10. Irony(in translation from Greek - pretense) is the use of a word or statement in a sense opposite to the direct one. Irony is a type of allegory in which mockery is hidden behind an outwardly positive assessment: Why, smart one, are you delirious, head?(I. A. Krylov)

26.2 “NON-SPECIAL” LEXICAL VISUATIVE AND EXPRESSIVE MEANS OF LANGUAGE

Note: In assignments it is sometimes indicated that this is a lexical device. Typically, in a review of task 24, an example of a lexical device is given in parentheses, either as a single word or as a phrase in which one of the words is in italics. Please note: these are the products most often needed find in task 22!

11. Synonyms, i.e. words of the same part of speech, different in sound, but identical or similar in lexical meaning and differing from each other either in shades of meaning or stylistic coloring ( brave - brave, run - rush, eyes(neutral) - eyes(poet.)), have great expressive power.

Synonyms can be contextual.

12. Antonyms, i.e. words of the same part of speech, opposite in meaning ( truth - lie, good - evil, disgusting - wonderful), also have great expressive capabilities.

Antonyms can be contextual, that is, they become antonyms only in a given context.

Lies happen good or evil,

Compassionate or merciless,

Lies happen dexterous and awkward,

Prudent and reckless,

Intoxicating and joyless.

13. Phraseologisms as a means of linguistic expression

Phraseologisms (phraseological expressions, idioms), i.e. phrases and sentences reproduced in ready-made form, in which the integral meaning dominates the meanings of their constituent components and is not a simple sum of such meanings ( get into trouble, be in seventh heaven, bone of contention), have great expressive capabilities. The expressiveness of phraseological units is determined by:

1) their vivid imagery, including mythological ( the cat cried like a squirrel in a wheel, Ariadne's thread, sword of Damocles, Achilles heel);

2) the classification of many of them: a) to the category of high ( the voice of one crying in the wilderness, sink into oblivion) or reduced (colloquial, colloquial: like a fish in water, neither sleep nor spirit, lead by the nose, lather your neck, hang your ears); b) to the category of linguistic means with a positive emotional-expressive connotation ( to store like the apple of your eye - trade.) or with a negative emotional-expressive coloring (without the king in the head - disapproved, small fry - disdained, worthless - despised.).

14. Stylistically colored vocabulary

To enhance expressiveness in the text, all categories of stylistically colored vocabulary can be used:

1) emotional-expressive (evaluative) vocabulary, including:

a) words with a positive emotional-expressive assessment: solemn, sublime (including Old Slavonicisms): inspiration, future, fatherland, aspirations, hidden, unshakable; sublimely poetic: serene, radiant, enchantment, azure; approving: noble, outstanding, amazing, brave; endearments: sunshine, darling, daughter

b) words with a negative emotional-expressive assessment: disapproving: speculation, bickering, nonsense; dismissive: upstart, hustler; contemptuous: dunce, crammer, scribbling; abusive/

2) functionally and stylistically colored vocabulary, including:

a) book: scientific (terms: alliteration, cosine, interference); official business: the undersigned, report; journalistic: report, interview; artistic and poetic: azure, eyes, cheeks

b) colloquial (everyday): dad, boy, braggart, healthy

15. Vocabulary of limited use

To enhance expressiveness in the text, all categories of vocabulary of limited use can also be used, including:

Dialectal vocabulary (words that are used by residents of a particular area: kochet - rooster, veksha - squirrel);

Colloquial vocabulary (words with a pronounced reduced stylistic connotation: familiar, rude, dismissive, abusive, located on the border or outside the literary norm: beggar, drunkard, cracker, trash talker);

Professional vocabulary (words that are used in professional speech and are not included in the system of general literary language: galley - in the speech of sailors, duck - in the speech of journalists, window - in the speech of teachers);

Slang vocabulary (words characteristic of youth slang: party, frills, cool; computer: brains - computer memory, keyboard - keyboard; soldier: demobilization, scoop, perfume; criminal jargon: bro, raspberry);

The vocabulary is outdated (historicisms are words that have fallen out of use due to the disappearance of the objects or phenomena they denote: boyar, oprichnina, horse-drawn horse; archaisms are outdated words naming objects and concepts for which new names have appeared in the language: forehead - forehead, sail - sail); - new vocabulary (neologisms - words that have recently entered the language and have not yet lost their novelty: blog, slogan, teenager).

26.3 FIGURES (RHETORICAL FIGURES, STYLISTIC FIGURES, FIGURES OF SPEECH) ARE STYLISTIC DEVICES based on special combinations of words that go beyond the scope of normal practical use, and aimed at enhancing the expressiveness and figurativeness of the text. The main figures of speech include: rhetorical question, rhetorical exclamation, rhetorical appeal, repetition, syntactic parallelism, polyunion, non-union, ellipsis, inversion, parcellation, antithesis, gradation, oxymoron. Unlike lexical means, this is the level of a sentence or several sentences.

Note: In the tasks there is no clear definition format indicating these means: they are called syntactic means, and a technique, and simply a means of expressiveness, and a figure. In task 24, the figure of speech is indicated by the number of the sentence given in brackets.

16.Rhetorical question is a figure that contains a statement in the form of a question. A rhetorical question does not require an answer; it is used to enhance the emotionality, expressiveness of speech, and to attract the reader’s attention to a particular phenomenon:

Why did he give his hand to insignificant slanderers, Why did he believe false words and caresses, He who comprehended people from a young age?.. (M. Yu. Lermontov);

17.Rhetorical exclamation is a figure that contains a statement in the form of an exclamation. Rhetorical exclamations enhance the expression of certain feelings in a message; they are usually distinguished not only by special emotionality, but also by solemnity and elation:

That was on the morning of our years - Oh happiness! oh tears! O forest! oh life! oh sunshine! O fresh spirit of birch. (A.K. Tolstoy);

Alas! The proud country bowed to the power of a stranger. (M. Yu. Lermontov)

18.Rhetorical appeal- this is a stylistic figure consisting of an emphasized appeal to someone or something to enhance the expressiveness of speech. It serves not so much to name the addressee of the speech, but rather to express the attitude towards what is said in the text. Rhetorical appeals can create solemnity and pathosity of speech, express joy, regret and other shades of mood and emotional state:

My friends! Our union is wonderful. He, like the soul, is uncontrollable and eternal (A.S. Pushkin);

Oh, deep night! Oh, cold autumn! Mute! (K. D. Balmont)

19.Repetition (positional-lexical repetition, lexical repetition)- this is a stylistic figure consisting of the repetition of any member of a sentence (word), part of a sentence or a whole sentence, several sentences, stanzas in order to attract special attention to them.

Types of repetition are anaphora, epiphora and pickup.

Anaphora(translated from Greek - ascent, rise), or unity of beginning, is the repetition of a word or group of words at the beginning of lines, stanzas or sentences:

Lazy the hazy noon breathes,

Lazy the river is rolling.

And in the fiery and pure firmament

Clouds are melting lazily (F.I. Tyutchev);

Epiphora(translated from Greek - addition, final sentence of a period) is the repetition of words or groups of words at the end of lines, stanzas or sentences:

Although man is not eternal,

That which is eternal - humanely.

What is a day or an age?

Before what is infinite?

Although man is not eternal,

That which is eternal - humanely(A. A. Fet);

They got a loaf of light bread - joy!

Today the film is good in the club - joy!

A two-volume edition of Paustovsky was brought to the bookstore. joy!(A.I. Solzhenitsyn)

Pickup- this is a repetition of any segment of speech (sentence, poetic line) at the beginning of the corresponding segment of speech following it:

He fell down on the cold snow,

On the cold snow, like a pine tree,

Like a pine tree in a damp forest (M. Yu. Lermontov);

20. Parallelism (syntactic parallelism)(in translation from Greek - walking next to) - identical or similar construction of adjacent parts of the text: adjacent sentences, poetic lines, stanzas, which, when correlated, create a single image:

I look at the future with fear,

I look at the past with longing... (M. Yu. Lermontov);

I was a ringing string for you,

I was your blooming spring,

But you didn't want flowers

And you didn't hear the words? (K. D. Balmont)

Often using antithesis: What is he looking for in a distant land? What did he throw in his native land?(M. Lermontov); Not the country is for business, but business is for the country (from the newspaper).

21. Inversion(translated from Greek - rearrangement, inversion) is a change in the usual order of words in a sentence in order to emphasize the semantic significance of any element of the text (word, sentence), giving the phrase a special stylistic coloring: solemn, high-sounding or, conversely, colloquial, somewhat reduced characteristics. The following combinations are considered inverted in Russian:

The agreed definition comes after the word being defined: I’m sitting behind bars in dungeon dank(M. Yu. Lermontov); But there were no swells running through this sea; the stuffy air did not flow: it was brewing great thunderstorm(I. S. Turgenev);

Additions and circumstances expressed by nouns come before the word to which they relate: Hours of monotonous battle(monotonous clock strike);

22.Parcellation(in translation from French - particle) - a stylistic device that consists in dividing a single syntactic structure of a sentence into several intonational and semantic units - phrases. At the point where the sentence is divided, a period, exclamation and question marks, and an ellipsis can be used. In the morning, bright as a splint. Scary. Long. Ratnym. The rifle regiment was defeated. Our. In an unequal battle(R. Rozhdestvensky); Why isn't anyone outraged? Education and healthcare! The most important areas of society! Not mentioned in this document at all(From newspapers); The state needs to remember the main thing: its citizens are not individuals. And people. (From newspapers)

23. Non-union and multi-union- syntactic figures based on deliberate omission, or, conversely, deliberate repetition of conjunctions. In the first case, when omitting conjunctions, speech becomes condensed, compact, and dynamic. The actions and events depicted here quickly, instantly unfold, replacing each other:

Swede, Russian - stabs, chops, cuts.

Drumming, clicks, grinding.

The thunder of guns, stomping, neighing, groaning,

And death and hell on all sides. (A.S. Pushkin)

When multi-union speech, on the contrary, slows down, pauses and repeated conjunctions highlight words, expressively emphasizing their semantic significance:

But And grandson, And great-grandson, And great-great-grandson

They grow in me while I grow... (P.G. Antokolsky)

24.Period- a long, polynomial sentence or a very common simple sentence, which is distinguished by completeness, unity of topic and intonational division into two parts. In the first part, the syntactic repetition of the same type of subordinate clauses (or members of the sentence) occurs with an increasing increase in intonation, then there is a significant pause separating it, and in the second part, where the conclusion is given, the tone of voice noticeably decreases. This intonation design forms a kind of circle:

If I wanted to limit my life to the home circle, / When a pleasant lot ordered me to be a father, a husband, / If I were captivated by the family picture for even a single moment, then it’s true that I wouldn’t look for another bride besides you. (A.S. Pushkin)

25.Antithesis or opposition(in translation from Greek - opposition) is a turn in which opposing concepts, positions, images are sharply contrasted. To create an antithesis, antonyms are usually used - general linguistic and contextual:

You are rich, I am very poor, You are a prose writer, I am a poet(A.S. Pushkin);

Yesterday I looked into your eyes,

And now everything is looking sideways,

Yesterday I was sitting before the birds,

All larks these days are crows!

I'm stupid and you're smart

Alive, but I'm dumbfounded.

O cry of women of all times:

“My dear, what have I done to you?” (M. I. Tsvetaeva)

26.Gradation(in translation from Latin - gradual increase, strengthening) - a technique consisting in the sequential arrangement of words, expressions, tropes (epithets, metaphors, comparisons) in order of strengthening (increasing) or weakening (decreasing) of a characteristic. Increasing gradation usually used to enhance the imagery, emotional expressiveness and impact of the text:

I called you, but you didn’t look back, I shed tears, but you didn’t condescend(A. A. Blok);

Glowed, burned, shone huge Blue eyes. (V. A. Soloukhin)

Descending gradation is used less frequently and usually serves to enhance the semantic content of the text and create imagery:

He brought mortal resin

Yes, a branch with withered leaves. (A.S. Pushkin)

27.Oxymoron(translated from Greek - witty-stupid) is a stylistic figure in which usually incompatible concepts are combined, usually contradicting each other ( bitter joy, ringing silence and so on.); at the same time, a new meaning is obtained, and the speech acquires special expressiveness: From that hour began for Ilya sweet torment, lightly scorching the soul (I. S. Shmelev);

Eat joyful melancholy in the red of dawn (S. A. Yesenin);

But their ugly beauty I soon comprehended the mystery. (M. Yu. Lermontov)

28. Allegory– allegory, transmission of an abstract concept through a concrete image: Foxes and wolves must win(cunning, malice, greed).

29.Default- a deliberate break in the statement, conveying the emotion of the speech and suggesting that the reader will guess what was unspoken: But I wanted... Perhaps you...

In addition to the above syntactic means of expressiveness, the tests also contain the following:

-exclamation sentences;

- dialogue, hidden dialogue;

-question-and-answer form of presentation a form of presentation in which questions and answers to questions alternate;

-rows of homogeneous members;

-citation;

-introductory words and constructions

-Incomplete sentences– sentences in which any member is missing that is necessary for completeness of structure and meaning. Missing sentence members can be restored and contextualized.

First of all, there are quotation marks; secondly, parcellation is a completely special technique. When we want to convey one thought, one sentence to the listener for greater clarity, we deliberately divide it into parts. For example: “I believed. I was waiting. But he didn’t come. Not today. Not tomorrow. »

Naturally, quotes can also contain parceled sentences. But here the quotes contain ordinary, “not artificially broken” sentences...

Write an essay based on the text you read.

Formulate one of the problems posed by the author of the text.

Comment on the formulated problem. Include in your comment two illustrative examples from the text you read that you think are important for understanding the problem in the source text (avoid excessive quoting). Explain the meaning of each example and indicate the semantic connection between them.

The volume of the essay is at least 150 words.

Work written without reference to the text read (not based on this text) is not graded. If the essay is a retelling or a complete rewrite of the original text without any comments, then such work is graded 0 points.

Write an essay carefully, legible handwriting.

Explanation.

Main problems:

1. The problem of teenagers becoming interested in virtual communication. (How should we approach teenagers’ passion for communicating on the Internet?)

2. The problem of mutual understanding between parents and children. (How can parents and children achieve mutual understanding regarding hobbies?)

3. The problem of using the Internet. (Is the Internet useful or harmful?)

1. Adolescents’ passion for virtual communication should cause concern to adults only if it has become an all-consuming passion, but in this case it is necessary to fight not with the computer, but with the reasons that gave rise to the addiction.

2. In order to better understand their teenage children, parents should remember that they themselves have experienced periods of fascination with technical innovations, and try to teach their children to be more confident in handling modern technology.

3. The Internet provides people with great opportunities, and the ability to use them today is a condition for achieving success.

Explanation.

(37) It’s just important to take into account: the fight will have to be waged not with the computer, but with the reasons that gave rise to the addiction. (the participial phrase “that gave rise to dependence” is a definition for the addition of “reasons”)


Modern humanity can no longer imagine itself without the Internet. But do we really need it? What are its harms and benefits? These are the questions A. Ivanova asks in her text.

It is safe to say that the World Wide Web has penetrated into all corners of human life. Almost everyone, young and old, is an Internet user. However, there are older people with conservative views who look at the “network epidemic” with caution. Are they right in their views? doubts? In his text-reasoning, the family psychologist quotes worried parents: “he abandoned his homework,” “talks to himself,” “online all day.” The author counters this with a reminder of the “television fever” popular for the generation of parents: being teenagers , they were just as immersed in phones and screens. The only difference is the modernity of technology. Next, the psychologist calls to fight one’s “backwardness.” Alexandra Grigorievna concludes her discussion with a warning about Internet addiction, which also occurs. At the end, the author gives wise advice: “the fight will have to be waged not with the computer, but with the reasons that gave rise to the addiction.”

I absolutely agree with the author, because I am also convinced of the benefits of the Internet. We have access to a colossal amount of data for self-education, we have the ability to travel without leaving the couch, we are able to work without leaving home, get everything we need directly into our hands and much more another. However, you should always beware of extremes.

We can see examples of a kind of virtual dependence in Russian literature. I. Goncharov’s novel “Oblomov” tells the story of Ilya Ilyich, a real escapist, who spent part of his life in an unclear dream, full of dreams and desires that never had fulfillment in life. Therefore, it is possible draw an analogy between Oblomov and some teenagers who, in the same way, hid from everything external in their small and cozy, but already virtual world.

Let's summarize the above: the Internet has a lot of advantages. The most important thing for each of us is to use these opportunities wisely.

Updated: 2018-09-18

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